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December 4, 2012
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Testing anime on paper, it took a while but I think there are a few mistakes but I'll fix them on Sai.
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Critique by *Projekt-Z Dec 5, 2012, 7:32:35 AM
The only areas that might need improvement are the head and the chest area, mostly the chest but... that just my opinion, the perspective is good, but if it were me, I'd square her shoulders away a little bit as well. The details are just fine, but again, I see many ways to do the head, shoulders, and chest part... I just think the easiest way would be to raise the breasts a little more but I'm not all that good at female anatomy. I'm not trying to sound harsh or anything like that, besides, it's good to see you trying your hand at this.
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